TheDarkPaladin's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Game 103 RPG 2.5]

Good effort.

It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into making this, which is good, but it's not quite on it's way to being a memorable game yet.

1. Story. The game needs some sort of story. Even if you're not a writer of epic plays, you can surely come up with a basic story to hold the thing together.

2. Oddities. Why is there a dog? How does paying money to a building grant you skill? How does this skill enable you buy more things in a shop?

3. Graphics. Although I cant draw myself, I think the graphics do need a little clearing up. Maybe add a common interface instead of just dropping text and icons wherever there's a free space.

4. Game. Maybe include another game? If not, improve the collision detection to make sure it's as tight as possible, I thought it was a little unfair.

I don't mean to insult your work at all, on the contrary, it's clear your trying hard and I hope you go far, it's just not quite up to scratch yet. I'm very interested in this project, as aimless RPGs are just my cup of tea :).

hallaby responds:

1) a story - your the mayor of the town and you have to make the town better

2) the dogs there cuz its a feature, just like the game, the music shop etc.
Its Building skill, so you have to the ability to build!

3) Yeah, I really do need to do this, but I have so many graphics :/

4) Ya, I have come up with a ocean game idea where you have to collect stuff at the bottom but avoid sharks

Thanks for helping me improve the game with your suggestions! I will probably add them, I hope this does kick off sometime :)

[Meteor Blast Synergy]

Very good game!

This is a very good piece of work. The graphics were nice, and the atmospheric music was quite fitting, but more importantly, the gameplay was brilliant! Very addictive!

I didn't read the bit about having to hold W, A and D together beforehand though, and wasn't able to shoot white lasers until I found out my keyboard couldn't handle the 3 buttons at once, but apart from that, this is a very solid game! Congrats!

ChromeShark responds:

I hope not too many people have this problem, but I was aware of it so I added the reconfiguration so no one would get left out. Thanks for your review!

[My Diamond V2]

Decent

The idea of the game is very original, but I think it could be executed better. A few powerups and a high-score board can go a long way. I only played this game for about 30 seconds; I'm far too tired to be co-ordinated at the moment, but I can imagine it getting quite boring, quite quickly.

But as I said, it is a very good idea, and I hope you develop it further.

weexi responds:

Highscore is on weexi.com

[Gamer Tutorial 2.0]

Decent

It's another of those ''This is probably gonna help me sometime'' tutorials. A lot of the information was good but some was pretty useless. Overall, it's quite good. I'll probably use some of the actionscripting in this. Well done!

Smoke-Tower responds:

thanks mate

[OMFG!: A Flash Tutorial]

Like a school...

I learned a lot from that. I'm a Flash n00b, so this was quite helpful. Thank you.

Smoking-Chimney responds:

Thanks for the review and I hope it helps!

[Flash Chatroom]

Lol

That fooled me for 10-20 mins.But everything started to get repetetive and i said 'press 112 if this is real' and somone said for the ninth time 'SPONGEBOB RULES!' Well done anyway!

liam0 responds:

Thanks :)