TheDarkPaladin's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[F&P - My Very First Flash]

A pleasure to watch

I haven't reviewed a movie in a while, but I picked yours out from the Judgment list because, I wont lie, it looked like an easy blam point. So I decided just to give it a chance, as I usually do, and boy, you surprised me.

The drawing was nice, the animation was impressive, the voice acting was top notch and just the general humour value was brilliant. The plot was moderately original, and the characters were funny, with great timing. You obviously have a creative mind, and a lot of potential. If you are serious about making Flash movies, I wouldn't be surprised if you gained some popularity very quickly with similar Flashes to these, as I think this is just what the Newgrounds audience is after: Some good art with some good one-liners after a hard day of doing whatever Newgrounders do. Good luck with any future work you do.

Haihaine responds:

Wow, that was a text-book example of an encouraging review. Thanks =]

I have quite a few ideas for more episodes of similar length and style. Hopefully I can make a new one once in a while! Unfortunately I don't exactly have unlimited time, but this will certainly not be my last flash!

[Sprite Tutorial V 2.0]

Good, but...

A useful tutorial, maybe not original, but a worthy submission no doubt. A little complaint that I have is the grammer and punctuation. Less "u"s, more "you"s, capitalisation and no smileys mid sentence make grammar nazis like me protect. 3/5. GLITCH: When clicking on creator bio and returning to the menu, the song plays twice. Oh and side-note, I was just in the audio portal listened to that song and came back to Flash and heard it again. Big coincidence.

crazygamer008 responds:

haha yea i just fixed that so =D im glad to see its doing better than my first one i will make a much much better one sometime im glad u liked it though

[Simon Slaughters ep.1...]

Another review from me

I'l review all your movies. But only if you respond to them all!

Graphics - Best work yet
Style - Good plot and everything. Just a bit short.
Sound - Not bad, but it wasn't my type.
Violence - I could tell it was GOING to get violent!
Interactivity - You tried to link to clockcrew.net with your preloader.
Humour - The end was the funniest part

Pretty good. I'd say Splee Ad is better (For obvious reasons) but you are a decent Flash Artist.

sweex20 responds:

Hello TheDarkPaladin,

thank you for your review. I'm happy to see you enjoyed my flash. I will respond to every single review you post, not just becouse i love getting reviews but in my opinion it would be rude if you let people tell how your movie is but don't respond. (maybe i should hope never get in the top 50 or frondpage =) would be alot of responding).

hehe if you didn't liked the sound you would be disapointed watching the secound part wich you can find under the autors name figlio nobile.

I must agree, Splee Ad is better. i would like to hear your obvious reasons thou =) im curious

i thank you again for your review wich gave me an idea... lets make part 3. of SS series! THANKS!

greetings,

sweex2.0

p.s. if found any mistakes like in spelling or grammar... don't pay any attention to it ^^

[Splee Ad.]

Pretty cool.

Not bad. I liked the way you used my music. I didn't like the way you cut half of it out though! I dont mind though. Well, anyway, back to the reviewing!

Graphics: Average all the way.
Style: It's kinda hard to explain this bit.
Sound: YOU USED MY MUSIC!!! 10!!111. </Noob>
Violence: Total whack.
Interactivity: There was a play and replay button...
Humour: Averagely funny.

Overall: Not a bad attempt. Fix up the voice and the graphics a little and you could have a real piece of work on your hands! Another way to get a few fives: Keep putting my music on your Flash. It feels great to have my sounds in somebodys Flash!

sweex20 responds:

^^ thanks for your review! its the best of all NG... reviews =)
ive cutted all your song up to little pieces cos the power of the beginning got lost at the end... i needed a song with that power and yours was the only with a little of it innit so... =\ pitty and im sorry but after all it suits well I guess...

^^ thanks again for your advice, I've used it with for the flash im gonna put up tonight if you wana c it, it will be sumthing with simon innit or flappy i dont know rly... O rly? Ya rly!

[What is a flash?]

Genourosity killed the 'Newgroundite'

I'm sorry but there was too many big words. I dont like big words at all. But in all that was pretty pointless. Then again so is B. Im not gonna babble on for paragraphs how a letter B is the most famous Flash of all time, but you get the drift. I just didnt understand this. Then again I have a dark aura so its probably just me. Oh well, I suppose with all my (good) reviews I end this saying well done on your effort.

JujubeLock responds:

I blame your educational system.

[RSFuture 1-3]

It was OK

I think you should have done it in RS2. Maybye the graphics would have been harder but the charachters would look a lot smoother. First runescape movie that isnt a piss-take. Pretty good. Oh yeah, If anyone plays RS2 and wants to meet me, my name is fireblade226. Im combat lvl 65 but dont excpect free stuff ;-)

Syrsly responds:

RS2 wasn't around when I made this.

[FF:The New Empire Part 6]

Oh man!

What a cliffhanger! I liked the movie but ive still not completed FF6 yet. Im only 3/4 through it, but there was no spoilers that I could see. Well done on making a well balanced flash!

Tootbook responds:

lol :D thanks for the positive feedback!